Spoilsbury Toast Boy -2 Bravo Mr. Firth, bravo
Your mind is like no other. I love all your flashes but my favorites are "The boy who smelt funny" and "Spoilsbury Toast Boy 1"
This one would have been a favorite but there were a few things that didn't impress.
-Your word choices for the first half of the flash. Something about the dialogue seemed non-genuine Firth dialogue, it seemed you were copying your own style but not doing it well at all. The second half, around the part with the doctor and the girl, were normal again
-There's a difference between disgusting and disturbing. I think you are good at both but the disgusting you may be to good at and you are really grossing people out. I know this must be fun and all for you to watch these reactions, but I personally think it takes away from the flash.
-The timing for the first half seemed a little fast, not enough time to sink in the lonley or disturbing feelings, but the second half once again improved.
Please think about what I'm am telling you.
Thanks! You're amazing!
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